B-soul
Broken Part II
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This is a song dealing with mental health and my issues coping
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Nice one. The guitar could have been a tad louder to give a taste of “metal” side to the song, particularly in combination with the death voice. Like it!
Thanks for listening and the input. I appreciate it. 🙂
The music is well made and effective, especially the keys, the vocals not on the same level. Imagine the singer as ******* son of Tom Waits and it makes a fab parody, but, as I think it is a serious piece I have some suggestions.
Use a subtractive eq method to remove the “honk” and tame the “rasp”. Frank Sinatra yer not, but I think with subtractive eq and colorful compression this could move into Morrison territory, sit better with the backer and be a more effective tune in general for you.
Daug
Thanks for listening. I do equalize the vocals, not sure what you mean by subtractive eq, I do reduce, and I refrain from boosting